Monday, 8 November 2010

giant acorns




Let Hansel follow his stupid crumbs home;
Gretel had more dignity than to go
where she wasn’t wanted.
She left him to go see L’il Red, instead.

http://www.stonyriver.ie/

Gretel veered left thro’ leaves
Watching squirrels gigantic acorns deftly ease
© Lib 140 characters or less for #Mondaymicrofiction
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous8 November 2010 at 07:25

    I love the rhythm of this. :)

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  2. libithina8 November 2010 at 08:02

    thankyou Evenstarwen for your kind words xx Lib

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  3. libithina8 November 2010 at 08:04

    the link for this is @Susan ~ blog www.stonyriver
    #microfiction #56 ~ enjoyed it

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  4. Pat8 November 2010 at 11:03

    LOL---Well, she's a sensible girl. I love the tie to Li'l Red, too!

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  5. septembermom8 November 2010 at 14:41

    Very nicely done. It does have a great timing and flow.

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  6. Nessa8 November 2010 at 16:53

    Very smart idea.

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  7. Susan Fobes8 November 2010 at 18:50

    Way to go Gretel!

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  8. Anonymous10 November 2010 at 13:49

    Ahh...several writers saw Hansel and Gretal and Little Red in this picture...great MM.
    Have a good week. Cheers!

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  9. Suz11 November 2010 at 08:22

    ha ha....you wicked mind you..that was good...

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